Was listening to the Drive By Truckers magnificent version of 18 Wheels of Love on their splendid At SXSW album and thought how many great songs are actually short stories
Harry Chapin’s Cats in the Cradle is an obvious one, as is Nilsson’s Rainnaker and George Jones’ He Stopped Loving Her Today
So go ahead, fill yer boots as Patterson Hood might say

Up the Junction – Squeeze
A kitchen sink drama in 3 minutes
and Labelled with Love for that matter
True
Thompson’s From Galway to Graceland was turned into a Radio 4 play, and of course a lot of the traditional ballads are story songs.
Latter day ballads too. Chris Wood / Hugh Lupton: One in a Million leaps to mind.
And this classic…
A holiday, a holiday
And the first one of the year
Lord Donald’s wife came into the church
The gospel for to hear
And when the meeting, it was done
She cast her eyes about
And there she saw little Matty Groves
Walking in the crowd
“Come home with me, little Matty Groves
Come home with me tonight
Come home with me, little Matty Groves
And sleep with me ’til light”
“Oh, I can’t come home, I won’t come home
And sleep with you tonight
By the rings on your fingers
I can tell you are Lord Donald’s wife”
“But if I am Lord Donald’s wife
Lord Donald’s not at home
He is out in the far cornfields
Bringing the yearlings home”
And a servant who was standing by
And hearing what was said
He swore Lord Donald he would know
Before the sun would set
And in his hurry to carry the news
He bent his breast and ran
And when he came to the broad mill stream
He took off his shoes and he swam
Little Matty Groves, he lay down
And took a little sleep
When he awoke, Lord Donald
Was standing at his feet
Saying, “How do you like my feather bed
And how do you like my sheet?
How do you like my lady
Who lies in your arms asleep?”
“Oh well, I like your feather bed
And well, I like your sheets
But better I like your lady gay
Who lies in my arms asleep”
“Well, get up, get up”, Lord Donald cried
“Get up as quick as you can
It’ll never be said in fair England
I slew a naked man”
“Oh, I can’t get up, I won’t get up
I can’t get up for my life
For you have two long beaten swords
And I not a pocket knife”
“Well, it’s true I have two beaten swords
And they cost me deep in the purse
But you will have the better of them
And I will have the worse”
“And you will strike the very first blow
And strike it like a man
I will strike the very next blow
And I’ll kill you if I can”
So Matty struck the very first blow
And he hurt Lord Donald sore
Lord Donald struck the very next blow
And Matty struck no more
And then Lord Donald he took his wife
And he sat her on his knee
Saying, “Who do you like the best of us
Matty Groves or me?”
And then up spoke his own dear wife
Never heard to speak so free
“I’d rather a kiss from dead Matty’s lips
Than you or your finery”
Lord Donald, he jumped up
And loudly he did bawl
He struck his wife right through the heart
And pinned her against the wall
“A grave, a grave”, Lord Donald cried
“To put these lovers in
But bury my lady at the top
For she was of noble kin”
Nope , pop songs are popular songs. Not poetry, not short stories.
Probably my favourite pop song is Cortez The Killer. Magnificent. Magnificent. Please, please don’t read this
He came dancing across the water
With his galleons and guns
Looking for the new world
And the palace in the sun
On the shore lay Montezuma
With his coca leaves and pearls
In his halls, he often wandered
With the secrets of the world
And his subjects gathered ’round him
Like the leaves around a tree
In their clothes of many colors
For the angry gods to see
And the women all were beautiful
And the men stood straight and strong
They offered life in sacrifice
So that others could go on
Hate was just a legend
And war was never known
The people worked together
And they lifted many stones
And they carried them to the flat lands
But they died along the way
And they build up with their bare hands
What we still can’t do today
And I know she’s living there
And she loves me to this day
I still can’t remember when
Or how I lost my way
He came dancing across the water
Cortez, Cortez
What a killer
Wow that’s poetry. Might see him play it tomorrow night
@Dai
Doing a longer setlist than in Europe – 20 songs per night vs 16 most nights here.
Hope you enjoy the show and do us a write up
Thank you. We shall see about a write up, bit busy at the moment
@jaygee Quickly, it was an excellent show with an amazing setlist. Only 2 repeats from last year’s CH gig. Cinnamon Girl and Like a Hurricane. I was in the pit at the front and only got there about a minute before he started (20 mins early)
1. Ambulance Blues
2. Cowgirl In The Sand
3. Be The Rain
4. Cinnamon Girl
5. Southern Man
6. Mr. Soul
7. Tumbleweed
8. Ohio
9. Looking Forward
10. Silver Eagle
11. Harvest Moon
12. Daddy Went Walkin’
13. New Mama
14. Sun Green
15. Like A Hurricane
16. Name Of Love
17. Old Man
Encores
18. This Note’s For You
19. Rockin’ In The Free World
@Dai
Cheers. D
Is Tumbleweed a new song or a deep, deep cut?
Hoping to see him perform it and a lot of other songs in Europe next spring/summer.
Sadly can’t see him touring forever
It’s from Storytone apparently. And was really lovely, think he was on a ukelele for that one @jaygee
Neil Hannon has form here:
…and this, whch broke my heart when I first heard it quite recently.
of a similar thwarted love story how about some Martin Rossiter
Wonderful song (of many)
Well Bob was rather partial
Lonesome Death of Hattie Carrol
Lily Rosemary and the Jack of Hearts
Hurricane
I started a similar thread in the past with this brilliant story song.
Tom Waits is the man for this
Also $29.00 and Day After Tomorrow.
And this.
Christmas Card from a Hooker in Minneapolis
Hey Charlie I’m pregnant and living on 9th Street
right above a dirty bookstore off Euclid Avenue
and I stopped takin dope and I quit drinkin whiskey
and my old man plays the trombone and works out at the track
he says that he loves me even though it’s not his baby
he says that he’ll raise him up like he would his own son
and he gave me a ring that was worn by his mother
and he takes me out dancin every Saturday night
and hey Charlie I think about you everytime I pass a fillin station
on account of all the grease you used to wear in your hair
and I still have that record of Little Anthony and the Imperials
but someone stole my record player now how do you like that?
hey Charlie I almost went crazy after Mario got busted
I went back to Omaha to live with my folks
but everyone I used to know was either dead or in prison
so I came back to Minneapolis this time I think I’m gonna stay
hey Charlie I think I’m happy for the first time since my accident
and I wish I had all the money we used to spend on dope
I’d buy me a used car lot and I wouldn’t sell any of em
I’d just drive a different car every day dependin on how I feel
hey Charlie for chrissakes if you want to know the truth of it
I don’t have a husband he don’t play the trombone
I need to borrow money to pay this lawyer and Charlie hey
I’ll be eligible for parole come Valentine’s day
i forgot this from Rain Dogs
A little vignette on male pride, a loved one taken for granted and leaving – and regrets, too late…
On Tuesdays, she used to do yoga, while I’d sit and watch the box in a vegetable way – but always ready to say to myself that I was an “artist”, implying that she was not.
It’s funny the way that self-pity can take over from self-esteem.
Well, I was the Prince of Pride and though I’d cheat, I never lied –
As if that were enough to make her happy!
As if that could satisfy her dreams!
It’s too late now to say that I’m so sorry,
Too late to say that I can change and mend.
The things that hurt – she didn’t need to worry – she always knew I’d get there in the end.
Now I’m tying myself up in contortions: don’t know if yoga will do me any good.
It’s about time I tried – though I’d rather be inside from the cold, studying tantra…still, I never did that when I could.
I never did the things that really mattered: there seemed to be some key I couldn’t find to unlock myself.
I could have done it with her help – but I was too busy scrabbling for each moment…now I don’t know what I did with all the time. Sometimes I’d play the “wild rover,” sometimes I’d just get smashed all day…
On Tuesdays she used to do yoga:
On Tuesday she went away.
Plenty of examples amongst the greats of British pop. Here’s a favourite:
And here’s another gem:
Momus has a lot of story songs. Not all of them are suitable for the general listener. I am particularly fond of this one…
Bowie: Uncle Arthur, The London Boys, The Little Bombardier, There Is A Happy Land, The Wild-Eyed Boy From Freecloud, God Knows I’m Good, Cygnet Committee etc etc.
Oh, and The Laughing Gnome, of course!
“Obie, did you think I was going to hang myself for littering?”
There’s a whole load of Gretchen Peters songs that fit the bill but I will go with Five Minutes:
I’ve got five minutes to sneak a cigarette
Five minutes to myself
Back behind the screen door of Andy’s luncheonette
And I ain’t got time to worry ’bout my health
My boss Andy says I smoke myself to death
Andy he reminds me some of you
Back when you were Romeo and I was Juliet
West Texas Capulet and Montague
Now I don’t think too much about you anymore
We weren’t much more than kids
It was nearly twenty years ago I shut and locked that door
Now I’ve got five minutes
Not much time to reminisce
Most nights I come home from work and I pour a glass of wine
Sometimes it’s three or four before I stop
And Jessie makes a sandwich if I sleep through suppertime
And she leaves me on the couch to sleep it off
Now Jessie just turned 17 and she’s wild as she can be
And there ain’t nothin’ I can do
Last weekend she ran off to meet a boy in Tennessee
Just like I used to run to you
I gave her hell when she came home this afternoon
Mascara runnin’ down her face
Seems like history repeats itself, and it ain’t up to you
And in five minutes
Your whole life can change
Andy he’s good to me, and I can see it in his eyes
He’d love to take your place
But somethin’ deep inside me just withers up and dies
To make love to him and only see your face
Somehow I’ve let myself go gently down the stream
A fine example I have set
Between the working and the livin’ and the ghosts that haunt my dreams
I’ve got five minutes and I’m gonna smoke this cigarette
God in Chicago – Craig Finn. A novel
In 4 minutes
Her mom found her brother
Then she found the container wrapped up in a newspaper
Stuffed in a duffel bag with hockey pads
And seven grand in rubber bands
We didn’t speak at the service
But then later, a message from a number that wasn’t familiar said
“Hey it’s Charlie’s sister, would you do me a favor?
There’s unfinished business
It’s roughly the size of a baseball”
I said I wasn’t totally sure, but yeah I could probably call someone
I knew this kid from my dorm when I went to school in Wisconsin
My two semesters were a total disaster, and he was part of the problem
Hadn’t talked in forever
But Wayne from Winnetka picked up on the first ring
I explained the situation
He said he’d be interested, but we’d have to come to him
We said lunch time on Wednesday
A Mexican restaurant a mile north of Midway
He worked for his father’s shipping company out west of the city
Right now I’m not working
She said we could split it
Just glad to be finished and not even tempted
But it’s so goddamn sad in her house right now
He’s still here in everything
She just needs a break from it
Said she wants to come with
We left really early
Went from St. Paul to Cicero
In my Chevrolet that didn’t have any radio
Had a boombox in the back seat that was running out of batteries
Played 1999 and Led Zeppelin III
When the tape deck got all wobbly
She still sang the harmonies
The transaction was easy
My buddy looked similar, just a little bit heavier
And counting all the money in front of him seemed silly
This isn’t the movies
It was over so quickly
Wayne got in his car
Drove into the sunset, turned left onto Cermak
She turned to me and said
I’ve never been to Chicago
I’ve got nothing going on tomorrow
Maybe we could stay here tonight
Lose ourselves in the glass and light
I’ve never been to Chicago
I’ve got nothing going on tomorrow
Maybe we could stay here tonight
Lose ourselves in the glass and light
We got a room at the Hyatt
Michigan Avenue, I can still picture you
We each got a toothbrush at Walgreens
We drank in the taverns, we ate somewhere Italian
Then she’s on the sidewalk
Trying to ask for a cigarette from oncoming traffic
I felt God in the buildings
The light from the skyscrapers showing up in the river
And four years didn’t seem like much anymore
We both want the same things
We kiss on the corner
We kiss in the corridors
We fumbled with clothing
We all want the same things
And then it was morning
We drove back all hungover
And all the way to Eau Claire, she played with her hair
Came up on St. Paul and she was sobbing
Wow, that’s devastatingly good. Thanks for posting.
That’s truly beautiful (many thanks) but it sure ain’t a pop song
Billy Bragg – Walk Away Renee
A totally politically incorrect short story song would be Zappa’s “Titties & Beer”.
The Killing of Georgie
Copacabana
Don’t you want me
Say hello wave goodbye
In the kitchen at parties
Decemberists – The Tain. Or the Mariners Revenge Song.
King of Rome,
Famous Flower of Seving Men
The Gypsy (MrFox)
Band Played Waltzin Matilda. and what seemed like most early 70s folk and folk rock output
Billy Don’t Be a Hero
I’ll stop there.
Sonara Death Row is a perfect example. Written by Kevin “Blackie” Farrell, he also wrote Mama Hated Diesels.
Commander Cody (etc.) specialised in story songs.
So good they, or rather Sean Penn, made a film based upon it: The Indian Runner.
Damn! My argument collapses in a pile of dust.
1952 Vincent Black Lightning – Richard Thompson
Says Red Molly, to James, “Well that’s a fine motorbike
A girl could feel special on any such like”
Says James, to Red Molly, “My hat’s off to you
It’s a Vincent Black Lightning, 1952
And I’ve seen you on the corners and cafes, it seems
Red hair and black leather, my favorite color scheme”
And he pulled her on behind
And down to Boxhill
They’d Ride
Says James, to Red Molly, “Here’s a ring for your right hand
But I’ll tell you in earnest I’m a dangerous man
For I’ve fought with the law since I was seventeen
I’ve robbed many a man to get my Vincent machine
And now I’m twenty-one years, I might make twenty-two
And I don’t mind dyin’ but for the love of you
But if fate should break my stride, then I’ll give you my Vincent, To Ride”
“Come down Red Molly, ” called Sargent McQuade
“For they’ve taken young James Aidee for Armed Robbery
Shotgun blast hit his chest, left nothing inside
Oh, come down, Red Molly, to his dying bedside”
When she came to the hospital, there wasn’t much left
He was runnin’ out of road. He was runnin’ out of breath
But he smiled, to see her cry
And said, “I’ll give you my Vincent
To Ride”
Said James, “In my opinion, there’s nothing in this world
Beats a ’52 Vincent and a Redheaded girl
Now Nortons and Indians and Greevses won’t do
Oh, they don’t have a Soul like a Vincent ’52”
Well he reached for her hand and he slipped her the keys
He said, “I’ve got no further use for these
I see Angels on Ariels in leather and chrome
Swoopin’ down from Heaven to carry me home”
And he gave her one last kiss and died
And he gave her his Vincent
To Ride
I think a few of John Prine’s would work ill suggest this one.
Donald and Lydia.
Or Lake Marie.
Ruby – don’t take your love to town…
The Road Goes On Forever – Robert Earl Keen
Sherry was a waitress at the only joint in town
She had a reputation as a girl who’d been around
Down Main Street after midnight, brand new pack of cigs
A fresh one hangin’ from her lips, a beer between her legs
She’d ride down to the river and meet with all her friends
The road goes on forever and the party never ends
Sonny was a loner, older than the rest
He was goin’ in the Navy but couldn’t pass the test
So he hung around town, he sold a little pot
The law caught wind of Sonny and one day he got caught
But he was back in business when they set him free again
The road goes on forever and the party never ends
Sonny’s playing eight-ball at the joint where Sherry works
When some drunken out-of-towner put his hand up Sherry’s skirt
Sonny took his pool cue, laid the drunk out on the floor
Stuffed a dollar in her tip jar, walked on out the door
She’s runnin’ right behind him, reaching for his hand
The road goes on forever and the party never ends
They jumped into his pickup, Sonny jammed her down in gear
Sonny looked at Sherry, said “Let’s get on outta here”
The stars were high above ’em, the moon was in the east
The sun was settin’ on ’em when they reached Miami Beach
They got a hotel by the water and a quart of Bombay gin
The road goes on forever and the party never ends
They soon ran out of money but Sonny knew a man
Who knew some Cuban refugees that dealt in contraband
Sonny met the Cubans in a house just off the route
With a briefcase full of money and a pistol in his boot
The cards were on the table when The Law came bustin’ in
The road goes on forever and the party never ends
The Cubans grabbed the goodies, Sonny grabbed the Jack
He broke a bathroom window and climbed on out the back
Sherry drove the pickup through the alley on the side
Where a lawman tackled Sonny and was readin’ him his rights
She stepped out in the alley with a single-shot .410
The road goes on forever and the party never ends
They left the lawman lyin’ and they made their getaway
Got back to the motel just before the break of day
Sonny gave her all the money and he blew a little kiss
“If they ask you how this happened, say I forced you into this”
She watched him as his tail lights disappeared around the bend
The road goes on forever and the party never ends
It’s Main Street after midnight just like it was before
Twenty-one months later at the local grocery store
Sherry buys a paper and a cold six-pack of beer
The headlines read that Sonny is goin’ to the chair
She pulls back onto Main Street in her new Mercedes Benz
The road goes on forever and the party never ends
REK specialises in such fare, as well as covering, see earlier entry above, Black Farrell.
See also Jesse With The Long Hair.
Folk and country are the perfect idioms for the long tale narrative. So much so that, for the former, the news was often transmitted in the medium of song, murder ballads being one especially good example, then crossing back and forth across the Atlantic, becoming less “new” and ever more embellished.
Mainly Norfolk is a good site for investigating this sort of song. Here’s an example, the song then subject to some commentary about the whole phenomenon of hand me down song traditions.
https://mainlynorfolk.info/lloyd/songs/themillersapprentice.html
Jason Isbell does noir. Cormac McCarthy would be proud.
“Yvette”
I can barely make out a little light from the house on the cul-de-sac
A bedroom upstairs, it’s a family affair
I’ve watched you in class, your eyes are cut glass and you stay covered up
Head to your toes, so nobody will notice you
I might not be a man yet, but that bastard will never be
So I’m cleaning my Weatherby
I sight in my scope, and I hope against hope, I hope against hope
Your mother seems nice, I don’t understand why she won’t say anything
As if she can’t see who he turned out to be
I might not be a man yet, but your father will never be
So I load up my Weatherby
I let out my breath, and I couple with death, I couple with death
Saw your father last night, in the window the light made a silhouette
Saw him hold you that way,
He won’t hold you that way anymore, Yvette
Unless my scrolling has slipped past it, I haven’t yet seen this little yarn:
Lowell drops a verse or so, but it’s a great performance anyway. The full recorded version tells even more of the torrid story.
Louise by Paul Siebel
All in two verses!!
“Well they all said Louise was not half bad
It was written on the walls and window shades
And how she’d act the little girl
A deceiver, don’t believe her that’s her trade
Sometimes a bottle of perfume,
Flowers and maybe some lace
Men brought Louise ten cent trinkets
Their intentions were easily traced
Yes and everybody knew at times she cried
But women like Louise they get by
Well everybody thought it kind of sad
When they found Louise in her room
They’d always put her down below their kind
Still some cried when she died this afternoon
Lousie rode home on the mail train
Somewhere to the south I heard it said
Too bad it ended so ugly,
Too bad she had to go this way
Ah but the wind is blowing cold tonight
So good night Louise, good night”
I was listening to that song just the other day, actually. Great choice, retro.
Interestingly, Suzy Thompson has just released an entire album of Paul Siebel covers, including, of course, “Louise”.
https://suzythompson.bandcamp.com/album/suzy-sings-siebel
Jets To Brazil’s Conrad is a sad and tender vignette of someone ending their life, and a great piece of capsule storytelling
A hounds-tooth coat
Pockets are bulging with Nembutal, bought from some doctor
Who also was bought to keep those pockets full.
The face was lost, partly recovered.
I’m half asleep, half in a frenzy
One side tries to smile enough for two
Pictures remain, spit at the image,
Cupboards well-stocked with things to diminish
The pain that comes with clarity and mirrors in well-lit rooms.
She checks in, in dwindling daylight,
A week up front, asks not to be bothered.
The registry will show her mother’s name.
Locks the door, sits on the bed just a minute before
She picks her purse up from the floor.
She’s pulling out what she needs.
Warming her wrists in promising water
Somebody’s love, another one’s daughter,
Readies herself, apologizing to the motel maids
Double edged and super blue, vertically letting the light from you
Casting a new darkness through the room
Angels lay their odds on you, know not quite what they should do
Only that they can’t quite tear themselves from the view.
And this could be a film, if you like depressing desert noir.
Townes Van Zandt/Marie
“I stood in line and left my name
Took about six hours or so
Well, the man just grinned like it was all a game
Said they’d let me know
I put in my time ’till the Pocono line
Shut down two years ago
I was staying at the mission till I met Marie
Now I can’t stay there no more
‘Fella ‘cross town said he’s lookin’ for a man
To move some old cars around
Maybe me and Marie could find a burned-out van
Do a little settlin’ down
Aw, but I’m just dreamin’, I ain’t got no ride
And the junkyard’s a pretty good ways
That job’s about a half week old besides
It’d be gone now anyway
Unemployment said I got no more checks
And they showed me to the hall
My brother died in Georgia some time ago
I got no one left to call
Summer wasn’t bad below the bridge
A little short on food that’s all
Now I gotta get Marie some kind of coat
We’re headed down into fall
I used to play the mouth harp pretty good
Hustled up a little dough
but I got drunk and I woke up rolled
A couple of months ago
They got my harp and they got my dollar
Them low life so-and-sos
Harps cost money and I ain’t got it
It’s my own fault I suppose
Well the Pocono’s down but the Chesapeake’s runnin’
Two freights everyday
If it was just me I’d be headed south
But Marie can’t catch no train
She’s got some pain and she thinks it’s a baby,
Says we gotta wait and see
In my heart I know it’s a little boy
Hope he don’t end up like me
Well, the man’s still grinnin’ says he lost my file
I gotta stand in line again
I want to kill him but I just say, “no,
I had enough of that line my friend”
I head back to the bridge, its getting kinda cold
I’m feelin’ too low down to lie
I guess I’ll just tell Marie the truth
Hope she don’t break down and cry
Marie, she didn’t wake up this morning
She didn’t even try
She just rolled over and went to heaven
My little boy safe inside
I laid ’em in the sun where somebody’d find ’em
caught a Chesapeake on the fly
Marie will know I’m headed south
So’s to meet me by and by
Aw, Marie will know I’m headed south
so to meet me by and by”
Arguably, the OP should have been titled “We’ve had lyrics as poetry, surely time we did Americana songs that are short stories”.
That would cover 94.86% of this thread. Interesting…
Hence my comment above, around how, loosely if not entirely, americana derives from the travelled canon of folk, and broadsheet ballads being all around telling a tale. If you want something different, how about calypso, but it draws, by and large, on the same tradition.
Just an observation, retro: not necessarily a complaint…
That’s because Americana makes the effort to write decent lyrics.
Exclusively Americana? You surprise me, Twang. A few alternatives on here, albeit mostly folky – even one posted by your good self!
Perhaps it’s got more to do with the tastes of the majority of the Afterword Massive© than the decency of the lyrics (…simultaneously ducks and gets coat…)
Seriously: just a throwaway comment on the large majority posted – my Hammill lyric seemed rather swamped! 🙂
@fitterstoke
Read and noted. Here’s a couple of songs from our side of the pond to put the UK back on the map
Cheers @Jaygee – although, as I said further up: it was just an observation, not necessarily a complaint!
No worries, F.
Here’s another UK goodie
Excellent choice!
Just kidding to the making an effort comment is largely true. A huge volume of rock/pop lyrics are garbage. Ian Anderson writes good lyrics though they wouldn’t work as stories really.
Laurie Anderson – The Dream Before
Hansel and Gretel are alive and well
And they’re living in Berlin
She is a cocktail waitress
He had a part in a Fassbinder film
And they sit around at night now
Drinking schnapps and gin
And she says, ‘Hansel, you’re really bringing me down.’
And he says, ‘Gretel, you can really be a bitch.’
He says, I’ve wasted my life on our stupid legend
When my one and only love was the wicked witch
She said, What is history?
And he said, History is an angel
Being blown
Backwards
Into the future
He said: History is a pile of debris
And the angel wants to go back and fix things
To repair the things that have been broken
But there is a storm blowing from Paradise
And the storm keeps blowing the angel
Backwards
Into the future
And this storm, this storm
Is called
Progress
___
A short story with multiple layers
https://www.bbc.co.uk/culture/article/20160401-how-klees-angel-of-history-took-flight
Steve Earle’s “Taneytown” from the brilliant “El Corazón” album:
I went down to Taneytown
I went down to Taneytown
To see what I could see
My mama told me never go
I’m damn near 22 years old
Sometimes I fear this holler swollow me
She ran off to Gettysburg
Went off with that new boy of hers
I snuck off after dark
It’s long way down the county road
Stars were bright
And the moon was low
Down to where the black top highway starts
I went down to Taneytown
I went down to Taneytown
I went down to see what I could see
Now everybody stared at me
You’d think that they ain’t never seen
A colored boy before
They chunked at me at me
And they called me names
They’d have whipped me sure but the sheriff came
I slipped off, ran through the dry goods store
I ran down Division Street
Some of them boys followed me
Down to the railroad track
Well, there’s four of them and I can’t fight
But I got my old Randall knife
I cut that boy and I never did look back
I went down to Taneytown
I went down to Taneytown
I went down to see what I could see
Cross the fields and woods I run
Like a bullet from a rabbit gun
Back home to my bed
Ma came in from Gettysburg
Her and that new boy of hers
“Boy you look like hell” was all she said
Month went by without a word
Somebody down the holler heard
About that boy they hung
He begged those men to spare his life
But I dropped my bloody Randall knife
He picked it up so they thought he was the one
I went down to Taneytown
I went down to Taneytown
I ain’t goin’ back there anymore
Dave Alvin singing Mary Brown
Somebody must know this one?
And although it’s another American story, I nominate Dylan’s Isis for it’s deft rhyme scheme
Leo Kottke’s wonderful cover of Tom T Hall’s Pamela Brown
When I first heard the song (when LK supported TMT on the HH tour
In 1978), I thought he sang the line
“Especially for what she did FOR me”
as
“Especially for what she did TO me”
Which changes the whole mood and meaning of the song from one
of yearning for a lost love to bitterness at being left lost and rootless.
Great song whichever way you look at it
Two songs with twists:
“The Hangman and The Papist” Strawbs
“Shirt of Blue”. The Men They Could Not Hang.
My favourite story songwriter: Stan Ridgway. He wrote a lot more than “Camouflage” you know.
Shirt of Blue is a good call but you could’ve had The Colours, Green Fields of France. Ghosts of Cable Street, Iron Masters and loads more. Paul Simmonds has a genius for these (I know Green Fields of France is another Eric Bogle song).
You beat me to it!
I remember seeing this about age 16 and being deeply impressed by his insolent delivery. One day I’ll be that cool, I thought. I wasn’t.
And still performing.
Although never a big hitwith the ladies
(A bit of science fiction: a cautionary tale of the fate awaiting the first astronauts to travel faster than the speed of light…)
We left the Earth in 1983, fingers groping for the galaxies.
Reddened eyes stared up into the void: a thousand stars to be exploited.
Somebody help me, I’m falling into sky, into earth, into sky, into earth.
It is so dark around: no life, no hope, no sound, no chance of seeing home again.
The universe is on fire, exploding without flame
We are the lost ones, we are the pioneers…we are the lost ones.
We are the ones they were going to build a statue for, ten centuries ago –
or were going to, fifteen forward.
One last brief whisper in our loved ones’ ears, to reassure them and to pierce the fear.
Standing at controls then still unknown, we told the world we were about to go.
Somebody help me, I’m missing…
I touch with my mind, I have no frame.
Well now, where is the time? And who the hell am I, here floating in an aimless way?
No one knows where we are.
Though they can’t feel us precisely, there is no fear here: how could such a thing exist in this place, where living and knowing and being have never been heard of, have never been heard of?
Doomed to vanish in the flickering light, disappearing to a darker night
Doomed to wander in a living death, living anti-matter, anti-breath.
Somebody help me, I’m losing, people around, no one to touch…
I am now quite alone, part of a vacant time-zone
Floating in the void, only dimly aware of existence –
A dimly existing awareness.
I am the lost one, I am the one you fear…I am the lost one.
I am the one who crossed through space, or stayed where I was –
Or didn’t exist in the first place.
I would imagine Ray Davies would provide a few good scenarios, he’brough our a collection of short stories called Waterloo Sunset.
Village Green Preservation Society would lend itself to a short crime novel a la Midsomer Murders poisoned jam at the village fete (worse than death)
The Jam – Down In A Tube Station At Midnight.
If Squeeze did the kitchen sink drama in 3 minutes, then Paul Weller was doing a Play For Today
I suppose it counts as Americana, but I love this by Rhiannon Giddens. The end is devastating. Like all good short stories, it leaves you filling in all that isn’t said.
Julie oh Julie
Won’t you run
‘Cause I see down yonder
The soldiers have come
Julie oh Julie
Can’t you see
That them devils have come
To take you far from me
Mistress oh mistress
I won’t run
‘Cause I see down yonder
The soldiers have come
Mistress oh mistress
I do see
And I’ll stay right here
Till they come for me
Julie oh Julie
You won’t go
Leave this house
And all you know
Julie oh Julie
Don’t leave here
Leave us who love you
And all you hold dear
Mistress oh mistress
I will go
Leave this house and all I know
Mistress oh mistress
I will leave here
With what family I got left
They’re all I hold dear
Julie oh Julie
Won’t you lie
If they find that trunk of gold by my side
Julie oh Julie
You tell them men
That that trunk of gold
Is yours my friend
Mistress oh mistress
I won’t lie
If they find that trunk of gold by your side
Mistress oh mistress
That trunk of gold
Is what you got
When my children you sold
Mistress oh mistress
Don’t you cry
The price of staying here is too high
Mistress oh mistress
I wish you well
But in leaving here
I’m leavin’ hell
Pete Atkin and Clive James not only wrote lyrics as poetry, but stories, too
This is great. It’s not just a story set to music, I first heard it as a joke.
The above reminded me of this, if for no discernible reason:
“Bentley said to Craig “Let him have it Chris”
They still don`t know today just what he meant by this
Bentley said to Craig “Let him have it Chris”
They still don`t know today just what he meant by this
Craig fired the pistol, but was too young to swing
So the police took Bentley and the very next thing
Let him dangle
Let him dangle
Bentley had surrendered, he was under arrest,
When he gave Chris Craig that fatal request
Craig shot Sidney Miles, he took Bentley`s word
The prosecution claimed as they charged them with murder
Let him dangle
Let him dangle
They say Derek Bentley was easily led
Well what`s that to the woman that Sidney Miles wed
Though guilty was the verdict, and Craig had shot him dead
The gallows were for Bentley and still she never said
Let him dangle
Let him dangle
Well it`s hard to imagine it`s the times that have changed
When there`s a murder in the kitchen that is brutal and strange
If killing anybody is a terrible crime
Why does this bloodthirsty chorus come round from time to time
Let him dangle
Not many people thought that Bentley would hang
But the word never came, the phone never rang
Outside Wandsworth Prison there was horror and hate
As the hangman shook Bentley`s hand to calculate his weight
Let him dangle
From a welfare state to society murder
Bring “back the noose” is always heard
Whenever those swine are under attack
But it won`t make you even
It won`t bring him back
Let him dangle
Let him dangle (String him up)”
One you can definitely dance to…
The Gift by The Velvet Underground. It’s a short story set to music as opposed a song that could be a short story but I think that the voice, the music, the context of the rest of the record all make it more than just a rather juvenile tale. I used to listen to it on one channel only, without the words.
There was a suggestion at one point that the music on The Gift was an instrumental called Booker T – although that might have been disproved since…
Surprised that no-one has mentioned The Magnetic Fields’ song “Papa was a rodeo.” But there we are.
Ode to Billie Joe: Bobbie Gentry 1967
Such a mysterious tale. A film was made about it a few years ago.
Was the third of June, another sleepy, dusty Delta day
I was out choppin’ cotton and my brother was balin’ hay
And at dinnertime we stopped and walked back to the house to eat
And Mama hollered out the back door y’all remember to wipe your feet
And then she said I got some news this mornin’ from Choctaw Ridge
Today Billie Joe MacAllister jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge
And Papa said to Mama as he passed around the blackeyed peas
Well, Billie Joe never had a lick of sense, pass the biscuits please
There’s five more acres in the lower forty I got to plow
And Mama said it was shame about Billie Joe, anyhow
Seems like nothin’ ever comes to no good up on Choctaw Ridge
And now Billie Joe MacAllister’s jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge
And Brother said he recollected when he and Tom and Billie Joe
Put a frog down my back at the Carroll County picture show
And wasn’t I talkin’ to him after church last Sunday night?
I’ll have another piece of apple pie, you know it don’t seem right
I saw him at the sawmill yesterday on Choctaw Ridge
And now you tell me Billie Joe’s jumped off the Tallahatchie Bridge
Mama said to me, Child, what’s happened to your appetite?
I’ve been cookin’ all mornin’ and you haven’t touched a single bite
That nice young preacher, Brother Taylor, dropped by today
Said he’d be pleased to have dinner on Sunday, oh, by the way
He said he saw a girl that looked a lot like you up on Choctaw Ridge
And she and Billie Joe was throwing somethin’ off the Tallahatchie Bridge
A year has come and gone since we heard the news ’bout Billie Joe
And brother married Becky Thompson, they bought a store in Tupelo
There was a virus goin’ ’round, Papa caught it and he died last spring
And now mama doesn’t seem to wanna do much of anything
And me, I spend a lot of time pickin’ flowers up on Choctaw Ridge
And drop them into the muddy water off the Tallahatchie Bridge
Yes, indeed!
Warren Zevon – Jeannie Needs A Shooter
Various singers – Long Black Veil
Johnny Cash – I Hung My Head
This.
Diamanda Galás – 25 Minutes To Go
Wow!
Short and perfect in everyway and he gets the girl!
Nick Cave does a version of this where he doesn’t get the girl. (Of course)
When I am retired, I will write a whole film script based on the 32 lines of She’s Leaving Home.
The Jackal.
My past passes before my eyes…
Or possibly not.
Surely the king of British storyteller songwriters is Scott Lavene?
Disneyland in Dagenham
Animals That Swim could also tell a good story in a song. This one lasts less than 2 minutes
Vic
What more fitting way to bring up the ton than by featuring the wonderful David Bromberg (accompanied by the Nitty Gritty Dirt Band’s John McKuen) doing a typically compelling version of one of the greatest short story songs of them all – Jerry Jeff Walker’s Mr Bojangles